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[The Other Side]

It crashes in Yuki's part.
I managed to get it working though.
Now the review:

Visual novel is good, very good thing.

The gameplay - disabled, this is visual novel.
You should add a warning though, some people don't understand this type of art.

The story - The story was neat, though some things weren't explained - like who organises this world, does it have any superiors? How do they know they are supposed to be in group with each other?

The music - fitting, quite neat.

The visuals - Now that is it. They are rather weak. Seriously. You should work more on this.
What you did was taking some images, making low-quality animelike portraits and just combined them over and over again. I'm not asking you to make full-length 3D movies, but please try to make more images to use. What I really disliked was that some of the "pasts" hadn't any visual and some did. Basically, it's supposed to be a visual novel, not a text novel. The actions happening in < > should have corresponding pictures of them, at least. I would love to see you improve.

What are character models?
I could maybe help in some way.

Typo - in some moment in Yuki's ending, there is "hoji" instead of "Shoji"

[Bobby Da Arrow]

Very nice, easy game. Fine spent 15 minutes. Asks for level pack.

[Vortex Point 5]

Ae jumpscare?! Low...

[A Temple Of Two Worlds]

Am I supposed to scroll any of the computer mails, reports etc.? Because I can't

[KoL: Stonepath]

Took me a while to figure out that the number puzzle works as number of clicks on every button in order... difficult :)

[Imperium 3]

Sorry, but the mini image on the games page lies. This isn't the game I was looking for, for third time. Why do you like to dissapoint people so much?

[Waitress Adventures]

Pewf already said what I had in mind through the first moment. Diner Dash Clone. Basically the fact you can't take the dishes right away after the receipt is pretty annoying.
I've seen single man talking to himself.
People get angry for no reason whatsoever.
It's difficult to pick the longest waiting client group if there are more of them, you failed to bring that Diner Dash mechanics where the first in line are in the bottom, easiest to pick.
The stars are only visible when hovering, this takes too much time to decide where to give coffee or cake.

Basically, only original parts of the game are its flaws. And the humilating view of woman. Why change the color to blonde? She'd be pretty with dark hair, too!

If you make a clone, at least do not make mistakes the original haven't.

2/10 only for playability.

Got bored after 10 level. This is not adventure game. Now I'm supposed to stack shitload of money to make this poor girl some douchebag chick... No innovation. No nothing. Just things that annoy people.
Also, cheap cloning. Low. Very low.

[Block the Pig]

It's just remake of the Cat.

[Super PSTW Action RPG]

Amazing. Truly amazing. The story, the decisions you have to face, and the fights of course! This game really pushes your skills to the max!

(Walkthrough by Polish players: hold spacebar once and for all)